Timeline-+Berlin

Hi Guys, I have uploaded my work for all of you to see. Remember, Austin, you are supposed to post what you are doing so that everyone can match the information. [|Timeline.doc]

Thanks! ~Berlin :-)

I don't know how to post it. From: Austin

Go tell Mr. Rowe. I will tell him for you when he comes back Monday. Okay? ~Berlin :-)

With the Timeline, there comes a "Historical Event Essay". I need some advice about the information and the grammar (if you have the time) please. ~Berlin :-)

In the timeline there was a war and the date isn't exactly 2000 to 2001??? Kevin Chen

It was 2000-2001, but I'mnot sure what the date is. Let me just think of a random name, hmmm, how about from **May 11th, 2000 to July 21st, 2001**? So random. Whatever. ~Berlin :-)

By Berlin Cheng, (Core 1 Rowe) The Brazilian War contained many rich, exciting events that will stay in history forever and never be forgotten; even to those who have never heard of it. It has been told that the Brazilian War was started by the Brazilian Ruler, named Wilhelm Rossiere. When he heard of Libera’s riches and lush vegetation, Rossiere decided that Libera could serve to be another home for his country. Little did he know, it would be much harder to conquer the small but independent island. Wilhelm Rossiere, Ruler of Brazil had always wanted to expand his territory. Although Brazil was already huge, he was a greedy man, and even if he was the King of the World, Wilhelm Rossiere would not be satisfied. So when the ruler heard of the little island Libera, he decided that his army would be able to conquer the small, but rich and lush island. After months of planning the attack, Brazil was finally ready to sneak up and triumph over Libera. That night, armed Brazilians entered Libera. With a war cry, General Sebastian Asmedus and his men besieged Libera and began killing every Liberan in sight. Thousands of Liberans perished, while some others were captured, badly beaten and sent off to Brazil. The people of Libera were becoming desperate. Not only were they losing war, they were losing valuable resources and men. So they gathered the leaders of Libera together for a secret meeting, where the islanders thought up a very tricky plan. Finally, they came up with an idea of bribing some of the Brazilians with promises of land and riches. The plan worked. General Sebastian Asmedus could sense a change of loyalty; his soldiers were suddenly disappearing in large numbers, and Liberans somehow always seemed to know what his next step would be. As a result of the Great Bribe, the sides switched and Libera chased the remaining opponents out of their island. As for the spies that supported them, they received the Promised Land and riches; Libera was paradise---it contained all that a man ever dreamed of. So because of Libera’s riches, the Brazilian King attacked the island. Caught by surprise, the Liberans began to lose the war; but the citizens of Libera found a quick and efficient way to win back their precious home.
 * The Brazilian War**

Then can I change it to soilders that carry shotguns and killed ruth?? kevin Chen

Well, come on, Brazil isn't THAT good. They probably carried, you know, those British guns that you used, not modern, flashy gunny thingys, okay? But the shotgun idea was a good one! ~Berlin :-) And plus, Ruth wasn't IN this war. She was in World War II, which, I think, happened WAY before 2000. Ruth is dead right now, remember, so she can't have died when she is already dead, get me? It doesn't even matter if Brazilian War was happening today (which it wasn't), it wouldn't affect your biography, right? Because Ruth's parents didn't die in our Brazilian War. So why do you want to change it? Hmm? ~Berlin :-)

Ruth was born in 1939 and when she born in world war two and 2000-1939 = 61 years old. (Kevin chen)

We are soooo OLD! Did we, the founders, go fight in the Brazillian War? -Jean ^_<

I know we are old. And no, we didn't fight in the Brazilian War because we are founders of this island. These founders are like, KINGS, of a place, you know? ~Belrin :-)

I didn't accually know that you guys wrote in here.... OPPPPPPSSSS sorry!!! - Jennifer Lee

Did you read the essay?? How do you guys think about it????? Me need advices. ~Berlin :-)

HEY!!! who is the one who does powerpoint? ~ Jennifer

Um I think Austin's doing it. But somehow he isn't really paying attention to us telling him we need the powerpoint so we can edit the parts... ~Berlin :-)